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英语试题|2026全国I卷读后续写写作指导+高质范文+写作素材梳理

pavestone2026-06-12 13:13:45历年高考60来源:双语美文精选-EnglishSky

一、分场景核心词汇(四类拆分:情感心理|动作细节|环境场景|剧情名词)

情感心理词(adj./n./v.,基础 + 高级替换)

基础:panic (n./v.) 恐慌;relieved (adj.) 感到宽慰的;desperate (adj.) 绝望的

高级替换:anxiety (n.) 焦虑;soothed (adj.) 平静的;hopeless (adj.) 无望的

动作细节词(v./adv.,基础 + 高级替换)

基础:drive (v.) 驾驶;inch (v.) 缓慢移动;wrap (v.) 包裹;roll down (v.) 摇下

高级替换:maneuver (v.) 小心移动;creep (v.) 缓慢爬行;envelop (v.) 包裹;lower (v.) 降下

环境场景词

snowstorm (n.) 暴风雪;whiteout (n.) 乳白天空(因强光与雪幕引起的能见度极低的情况);ditch (n.) 沟;snow - covered (adj.) 被雪覆盖的

剧情专属名词

vehicle (n.) 车辆;destination (n.) 目的地;holiday plan (n.) 假期计划

二、分场景高频写作短语

(1)第一段(首句专属)必背短语

suggest doing sth. 建议做某事

continue one's journey 继续某人的旅程

by train 乘火车

(2)第二段(首句专属)必背短语

return to do sth. 回去做某事

get one's car 取某人的车

(3)全文衔接过渡万能短语

at one point 在某一时刻

eventually 最终

with the help of 在…… 的帮助下

三、分段定制写作句型

(1)适配第一段开头句型(基础句|中档复合句|高分特殊句式)

基础句:Emily was worried about her car. 艾米丽担心她的车。

中档复合句:Daniel, who was familiar with the local transportation, explained how convenient it was to take the train. 熟悉当地交通的丹尼尔解释说坐火车有多方便。(定语从句)

高分特殊句式:Not only did Daniel give Emily some advice on taking the train, but also he offered to drive her to the train station. 丹尼尔不仅给艾米丽提供了坐火车的建议,还主动提出开车送她去火车站。(部分倒装)

(2)适配第二段开头句型(基础句|中档复合句|高分特殊句式)

基础句:Emily thanked Daniel and Rachel again. 艾米丽再次感谢丹尼尔和瑞秋。

中档复合句:When Emily got her car, she found it had been repaired by Daniel and Rachel. 当艾米丽取到车时,她发现车已经被丹尼尔和瑞秋修好了。(时间状语从句)

高分特殊句式:It was Daniel and Rachel who made Emily's Christmas journey a warm and unforgettable one. 正是丹尼尔和瑞秋让艾米丽的圣诞之旅变得温暖且难忘。(强调句)

(3)高考通用万能提分句型

What + 主语 + need /want/lack... is... 某人需要 / 想要 / 缺少的是……,如:What Emily needed most at that time was a way to reach her boyfriend. 艾米丽当时最需要的是一种能到达她男朋友身边的方式。(主语从句)

四、高考高分标准范文(两段式,严格词数 150 左右)

Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. “The train station isn't far from here,” Daniel said. “It's a much safer option in such weather.” Emily was a bit hesitant at first, worried about her car. But Daniel assured her that they could help take care of it. With their encouragement, Emily decided to follow their advice. Daniel drove her to the train station. On the way, he told Emily interesting stories about the town, soothing her anxiety.

Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. She was surprised to find it had been pulled out of the ditch and repaired. Daniel and Rachel were waiting for her with big smiles. Emily was deeply touched. “Thank you so much. You've saved my Christmas,” she said, her eyes filled with gratitude. This unexpected encounter not only got her to her boyfriend in time but also left her with a heart - warming memory of kindness.

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