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读后续写 I was sitting at my kitchen table the other day with a pen, a notebook, a calculator

I was sitting at my kitchen table the other day with a pen, a notebook, a calculator, and a pile of bills, I was doing my monthly budget(预算). There were bills for electric, water, rent, insurance, the car payment, the phone bill, and the WiFi bill. Plus money needed to be set aside for food, gas, clothes, and hopefully a little left over to save for those unexpected bills that always seemed to show up. When I was done I shook my head, closed my eyes, and thought of a time long ago when I would regularly get treasures.

When I was a boy, we lived across the road from Camp Caesar. It held week long camps all through the Summer and my grandma who I lovingly called “Nanny” worked in its big kitchen. I remember sneaking(溜进) in there getting a smile, a hug, a kiss, and a hot cookie from Nanny. Then she would always dig deep in her pockets and pull out a treasure, a shiny coin. She would give it to me and I would run down the hill to either get an ice cold can of coke from the pop machine or I would head to the camp’s swimming pool where I could buy a warm cup of cherry coke for 15 cents and a tiny 10 cent bag of chips from the stand. I took my time because it was always a big decision. It was nice to feel so rich for a few minutes.

Looking back now I can see that the real treasure wasn't the coin at all. It was the love with which Nanny gave it to me. I would have still visited her at work every day if I had never gotten a single coin. It was her smile, hugs, and kisses that were priceless in my heart then and now.

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Then I posted my grandmother’s story online.

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It was suggested that we should write a book about these stories.

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【答案】One possible version.

Then I posted my grandmother’s story online. Many people responded positively. My grandma’s story brought back memories of their happy childhood. Some shared stories of their loved ones and memories of them. We were discussing how we could remember the love forever. People put forward many ways to pass on the love of older generations, such as giving more love to our children, telling them the stories of our relatives and so on. In this way, we can make the world into a big family full of love.

It was suggested that we should write a book about these stories. I was quite in favor of this approach. They proposed that I put together the stories. I took great pride in accepting the suggestion. We selected 100 touching stories and then we wrote articles about them. When we finished our texts, we posted them online for discussion and suggestions. Later we made further improvement on them. Eventually, the publisher published the book for us and it became a best seller.

【解析】

【分析】这是一篇夹叙夹议的文章。文章主要讲述了作者在做预算的时候想起了自己的祖母,回忆了和祖母相处的时光以及祖母对作者深深的爱。作者将对祖母的回忆发贴到网上,得到了积极的跟帖,引起了积极的反应和讨论,于是有人建议要把与家人之间“爱”的故事编辑成书,出版发表。

【详解】1.段落续写:

①由第一段首句内容“Then I posted my grandmother’s story online.(然后我把我祖母的故事贴到了网上。)”可知,第一段可描写作者将故事发帖到网上后得到的回复,大家反应很积极,故事引起了许多人的回忆和关于如何能永远记住这种爱的讨论。

②由第二段首句内容“It was suggested that we should write a book about these stories.(有人建议我们应该写一本关于这些故事的书。)”可知,第二段可描写作者和其他人一起将故事整理编辑,讨论修改,最终出版了书籍。

2.续写线索:引发积极的回帖——讨论如何铭记“爱”——出版书籍的想法——整理选择并编辑故事——讨论修改——出版书籍成功

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.回复:respond/reply

②.使想起:bring back/remind sb. of

③.讨论:discuss/talk over

④.建议:propose/suggest/advise

⑤.整理:put together/gather

⑥.选择:select/choose

情绪类

①.积极:positive attitude/respond positively

②.开心:happy/delighted/joyful

③.骄傲的/自豪的:take great pride in/be proud of

【点睛】[高分句型1]. We were discussing how we could remember the love forever.(我们在讨论如何才能永远记住这份爱。)

句中“how we could remember the love forever”为宾语从句。

[高分句型2]. When we finished our texts, we posted them online for discussion and suggestions.(当我们完成我们的文本时,我们把它们发布在网上供讨论和建议。)

句中“When we finished our texts”为时间状语从句。

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