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读后续写微技能:25个动作链逻辑分类(全)

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举例部分的的英语,并没有完全按照语法规则,因为并不是按照段落文章的格式列出

① 遇到火灾/水灾/雪灾/地震/洪水

动作链:察觉异常(闻到焦味/听到巨响)→ 迅速确认灾难源头 → 寻找最近的逃生路径 → 迅速逃离 → 找到安全位置

例子:

她闻到一股刺鼻的焦味,立刻停下手中的活→ 四处查看,发现厨房已被火焰吞噬 → 她赶紧抓起手机,冲向大门 → 一边拨打119,一边奔向街道 → 到达安全地带后,她终于松了一口气。

She smelled a sharp, acrid burning odor and immediately stopped what she was doing → She looked around and discovered that the kitchen was engulfed in flames → She quickly grabbed her phone and rushed towards the door → While dialing 911, she ran out onto the street → After reaching a safe spot, she finally breathed a sigh of relief.

② 各种灾难救人

动作链:听到求救声音→ 确定求救者位置 → 准备救援工具 → 进入救援现场 → 成功救出伤者 → 将伤者带到安全区域

例子:

他隐约听到废墟下传来微弱的呼救声→ 立即确定声源 → 找到一根铁杆作为撬杠 → 小心翼翼地挪开瓦砾 → 成功将受困者拉出 → 他背起受困者,迅速撤离到安全区域。

He vaguely heard faint cries for help from beneath the rubble → Immediately located the source → Found a metal rod to use as a lever → Carefully lifted away the debris → Successfully pulled the trapped person out → He carried the person to a safe area.

③ 各种灾难求救

动作链:意识到无法独自脱险→ 寻找求救工具(电话/信号设备)→ 发送求救信号(拨打电话/发射信号)→ 等待救援 → 确认救援抵达

例子:

她意识到自己被困在水中,无法游到岸边→ 她拼命寻找漂浮的木板 → 抓住木板,用随身携带的手机拨打求救电话 → 等待救援时,她紧紧抓住木板 → 听到远处传来直升机的声音,她的心情逐渐平静下来。

She realized she was trapped in the water and couldn’t swim to shore → She desperately looked for a floating plank → Grabbing the plank, she used her phone to call for help → While waiting for rescue, she held onto the plank tightly → Hearing the sound of a helicopter in the distance, her anxiety started to fade.

④ 各种灾难逃生

动作链:察觉到灾难逼近→ 确定最佳逃生路径 → 准备逃生用品 → 按照计划逃生 → 确保安全后停止行动

例子:

他感到地面剧烈震动→ 马上确定通往出口的最短路线 → 拿上背包中的急救包和水 → 沿着走廊迅速朝出口方向跑去 → 到达户外空旷地后,他停下来,检查自己是否受伤。

He felt the ground shake violently → Immediately determined the shortest route to the exit → Grabbed the first-aid kit and water from his backpack → Ran quickly down the hallway towards the exit → After reaching the open outdoor area, he stopped to check if he was injured.

⑤ 灾难结束之后庆幸

动作链:确认灾难结束→ 检查自己是否安全 → 环顾四周确定无危险 → 感叹生还幸运 → 与他人分享劫后余生的感受

例子:

地震终于停止→ 他拍了拍自己的身体,确保没有受伤 → 环顾四周,确认没有新的危险 → 他长舒一口气,感叹道:“我还活着!” → 随后与周围的幸存者紧紧拥抱。

The earthquake finally stopped → He patted his body to make sure he wasn’t injured → Looked around to confirm there was no new danger → He exhaled deeply, saying, “I’m alive!” → Then embraced the surrounding survivors tightly.

⑥ 发现子女/妻子/丈夫不见

动作链:发现不在预期位置→ 寻找可能的去向 → 询问周围的人 → 联系家人和朋友 → 报警或求助 → 持续寻找

例子:

她发现儿子不在卧室里→ 迅速检查了整个房子 → 问了邻居,没人见过他 → 她拿起电话,急切地拨打家人和朋友的号码 → 最终报警,并请求帮助寻找 → 整晚她都在街上四处寻找。

She noticed her son wasn’t in his bedroom → Quickly checked the entire house → Asked the neighbors, but no one had seen him → She grabbed her phone and urgently called family and friends → Finally reported to the police and asked for help → She spent the whole night searching the streets.

⑦ 找人一波三折

动作链:初步线索失败→ 重整计划寻找 → 新的线索引导 → 途中遇到挫折或意外 → 最终找到目标

例子:

他先去常去的咖啡馆找她,但没找到→ 重新思考她可能去的地方 → 突然想到她提过的公园 → 在公园里找了半天,甚至跟一位陌生人发生了争执 → 终于在一个偏僻的长椅上发现了她,她正静静地坐着。

He first went to the usual café to find her, but she wasn’t there → Reconsidered where she might have gone → Suddenly remembered she mentioned a park → Searched the park for a long time, even got into an argument with a stranger → Finally found her sitting quietly on a secluded bench.

⑧ 欣赏景色

动作链:抵达观景点→ 选定最佳观景位置 → 放松身体 → 环顾四周欣赏美景 → 深呼吸感受空气 → 内心平静下来

例子:

她走到山顶,选了一个视野开阔的地方坐下→ 调整姿势,让自己更舒适 → 眼睛扫过山谷的每一寸风景 → 深吸一口气,感受到空气中的清新 → 她闭上眼睛,心中感到无比宁静。

She reached the mountain top and found a spot with a wide view to sit down → Adjusted her posture to get comfortable → Let her eyes sweep across every inch of the valley → Took a deep breath, feeling the freshness in the air → Closed her eyes, feeling an overwhelming sense of peace.

⑨ 发现野生动物

动作链:发现不寻常动静→ 定睛观察 → 确认是野生动物 → 慢慢靠近 → 观察动物的行为 → 保持安全距离

例子:

他听到草丛里有动静→ 他停下脚步,仔细观察 → 发现是一只小鹿在觅食 → 他放慢脚步,小心翼翼地靠近 → 观察它的每一个动作,不想惊吓到它 → 但始终保持一定的距离。

He heard rustling in the bushes → Stopped walking and observed closely → Saw it was a deer foraging → Slowed his pace and cautiously approached → Watched its every move, not wanting to startle it → But kept a safe distance at all times.

⑩ 救动物

动作链:发现动物受困→ 判断如何解救 → 获取工具或方法 → 接近动物 → 实施救援 → 检查动物状态

例子:

他看到一只小狗被困在河边的泥潭里→ 判断必须用绳子才能把它拉出来 → 找到一根结实的树枝和绳子 → 小心接近小狗,安抚它别害怕 → 将绳子套在小狗身上,慢慢拉上岸 → 小狗获救后,他检查了一下它的四肢,确保没有受伤。

He saw a puppy trapped in a muddy bank by the river → Realized he needed a rope to pull it out → Found a sturdy branch and some rope → Carefully approached the puppy, calming it down → Looped the rope around the puppy and slowly pulled it to safety → After rescuing the puppy, he checked its legs to make sure

it wasn’t injured.

⑪ 猎人发现危险的野兽

动作链:感受到威胁→ 确认野兽的位置 → 准备武器 → 评估逃跑或战斗的可能 → 做出决定 → 行动以确保安全

例子:

他感觉到背后有一阵寒意→ 慢慢转身,发现是一头熊正向他走来 → 他悄悄拉开弓箭,目光紧盯着熊 → 评估了周围的地形,决定采取防御姿态 → 当熊靠近时,他果断射出箭矢 → 熊受伤后逃跑,他才松了一口气。

He felt a chill down his spine → Slowly turned around to see a bear approaching him → Quietly drew his bow, eyes locked on the bear → Assessed the surrounding terrain and decided to take a defensive stance → As the bear came closer, he swiftly released the arrow → The bear fled after being hit, and he finally breathed a sigh of relief.

⑫ 受到野兽攻击

动作链:意识到被攻击→ 尝试躲避 → 找到武器或防御物 → 反击或逃跑 → 确保自己安全

例子:

一声低吼在他耳边响起,他猛然转头,发现一头狼正扑向他→ 他迅速躲闪,狼的爪子擦过他的肩膀 → 他抓起地上的树枝,用力挥向狼 → 狼被击退,他趁机拔腿跑开 → 跑出一段距离后,他回头确认狼没有追来,才稍稍放下心。

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A low growl sounded in his ear, and he turned sharply to see a wolf lunging at him → He quickly dodged, the wolf’s claws grazing his shoulder → He grabbed a branch from the ground and swung it hard at the wolf → The wolf retreated, and he seized the moment to sprint away → After running a good distance, he looked back to make sure the wolf wasn’t following before he relaxed slightly.

⑬ 转危为安

动作链:发现自己处于危险之中→ 冷静思考解决办法 → 实施行动 → 成功脱险 → 重新确认安全

例子:

他发现自己被困在狭窄的山路上,两侧是陡峭的悬崖→ 他深吸一口气,努力让自己冷静下来 → 发现一块较大的石头可以作为支撑点 → 小心翼翼地一步步爬上去,避免滑倒 → 终于到达安全地带,他长舒一口气,环顾四周确认无其他危险。

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He found himself trapped on a narrow mountain path, with steep cliffs on both sides → Took a deep breath, trying to calm himself down → Spotted a larger rock that could serve as a foothold → Carefully climbed up, making sure not to slip → Finally reached a safe area, he exhaled deeply and looked around to ensure there was no other danger.

⑭ 朋友/夫妻吵架

动作链:意见产生分歧→ 情绪逐渐升级 → 爆发争吵 → 言辞激烈 → 其中一方冷静下来 → 吵架结束,气氛紧张

例子:

他们讨论着晚饭的安排,意见很快产生了分歧→ 声音逐渐提高,彼此都不愿让步 → 最终,话语变得越来越尖锐,争吵不可避免地爆发了 → “你从来不考虑我的感受!”她喊道 → 他看着她,一言不发,慢慢冷静下来 → 房间里陷入了一片沉默,空气中弥漫着紧张的气氛。

They were discussing dinner plans, and it didn’t take long for their opinions to diverge → Their voices gradually grew louder, neither willing to back down → Finally, the words became sharper, and a full-blown argument erupted → “You never consider my feelings!” she shouted → He looked at her, saying nothing, slowly calming down → The room fell into silence, tension hanging in the air.

⑮ 内心挣扎

动作链:面临选择→ 内心纠结 → 不断反复权衡利弊 → 决定采取行动 → 付诸实践

例子:

他站在门口,手里握着那封信,心里充满了挣扎→ 他一遍遍告诉自己这是正确的决定 → 但另一种声音却在耳边响起,提醒他可能的后果 → 他反复踱步,手心冒汗 → 最终,他深吸一口气,将信放进了信箱 → 决定已经做出,他的肩膀顿时感到一阵轻松。

He stood at the door, holding the letter, his heart full of conflict → He kept telling himself this was the right decision → But another voice echoed in his mind, reminding him of the potential consequences → He paced back and forth, palms sweating → Finally, he took a deep breath and dropped the letter into the mailbox → The decision was made, and a weight lifted from his shoulders.

⑯ 筹备惊喜活动

动作链:产生惊喜的想法→ 计划活动细节 → 准备惊喜材料 → 实施惊喜 → 观察对方反应

例子:

他突然想到要为她筹备一个惊喜生日派对→ 他列出宾客名单,挑选合适的场地 → 购买了她最喜欢的花和蛋糕,装饰了场地 → 当她走进房间时,灯光突然亮起,大家齐声高喊“生日快乐!” → 看着她脸上的惊讶与感动,他的心里满是满足感。

He suddenly thought of organizing a surprise birthday party for her → He made a guest list and chose a suitable venue → Bought her favorite flowers and cake, decorated the venue → When she walked into the room, the lights suddenly came on, and everyone shouted “Happy Birthday!” → Seeing the surprise and emotion on her face, his heart was filled with satisfaction.

⑰ 准备礼物

动作链:决定送礼物→ 选择礼物类型 → 考虑对方的喜好 → 购买或制作礼物 → 包装礼物 → 将礼物送出

例子:

他决定给她准备一份特别的礼物→ 想了想她最近提到的那本书 → 马上去了书店,挑选了一本精装版 → 回家后,他用心地包上了漂亮的包装纸 → 当她打开礼物时,脸上露出了灿烂的笑容。

He decided to prepare a special gift for her → Remembered she had recently mentioned a particular book → Immediately went to the bookstore and picked out a hardcover edition → At home, he carefully wrapped it in beautiful paper → When she opened the gift, a bright smile appeared on her face.

⑱ 意料之外

动作链:事情按计划进行→ 突发意外 → 应急反应 → 处理意外 → 结果出乎意料

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例子:

他们按计划去野餐,一切都很顺利→ 突然天色变暗,下起了大雨 → 他们慌忙收拾东西,寻找避雨的地方 → 但雨越下越大,他们只好躲进一间废弃的小屋 → 虽然计划被打乱,但他们反而在小屋里度过了一段难忘的时光。

They went on a picnic as planned, everything was going smoothly → Suddenly, the sky darkened, and it started to rain heavily → They quickly packed up and looked for shelter → But the rain kept pouring, so they had to take refuge in an abandoned hut → Although their plans were disrupted, they ended up having an unforgettable time in the hut.

⑲ 自己一个人在野外探险

动作链:准备探险装备→ 选择探险路线 → 出发 → 途中遇到困难 → 解决问题 → 继续探险

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例子:

他整理好背包,检查了地图和指南针→ 选了一条通往森林深处的路线 → 迎着晨光,他开始了独自的探险 → 途中他遇到了一片沼泽地,前进受阻 → 他仔细观察地形,找到了一条绕过沼泽的小道 → 克服了障碍后,他继续向前,心中充满了成就感。

He packed his bag, checking the map and compass → Chose a route leading deep into the forest → Setting out in the morning light, he began his solo adventure → Along the way, he encountered a swampy area that blocked his path → He carefully observed the terrain and found a narrow path around the swamp → After overcoming the obstacle, he continued forward, filled with a sense of accomplishment.

⑳ 比赛开始(马术、篮球、足球、钢琴、小提琴、演讲)

动作链:做好准备工作→ 等待比赛开始 → 比

赛开始信号发出→ 全力投入比赛 → 适应比赛节奏 → 调整战术 → 全力冲刺 → 比赛结束

例子:

他检查了马鞍和缰绳,确保一切正常→ 聚精会神地等待裁判的哨声 → 哨声一响,他立刻策马飞奔 → 感受着马蹄踏在地面的震动,他迅速进入状态 → 中途他发现自己落后了,于是调整了骑马的节奏 → 在最后一圈,他拼尽全力冲刺 → 终点线在眼前,他终于超越了对手。

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He checked the saddle and reins to ensure everything was in place → Focused intensely, waiting for the referee’s whistle → As soon as the whistle blew, he urged his horse into a gallop → Feeling the horse’s hooves pounding the ground, he quickly found his rhythm → Midway, he realized he was falling behind, so he adjusted his riding pace → On the final lap, he gave it his all in a sprint → The finish line was in sight, and he finally overtook his opponent.

21 比赛结束获奖

动作链:比赛结束→ 等待结果公布 → 听到自己获奖 → 表达激动与感激 → 上台领奖 → 分享获奖感言

例子:

比赛结束的哨声响起,他大口喘着气→ 站在赛场边等待结果 → 当他听到自己的名字时,他几乎不敢相信自己的耳朵 → 他兴奋地跳了起来,和队友们击掌庆祝 → 走上领奖台,接过奖杯时,他的眼中闪烁着泪光 → 在观众的掌声中,他分享了自己的获奖感言,感谢了所有支持他的人。

The whistle signaling the end of the match blew, and he panted heavily → Stood on the sidelines waiting for the results → When he heard his name, he could hardly believe his ears → He jumped up in excitement, high-fiving his teammates → Stepping onto the podium, he took the trophy with tears in his eyes → Amidst the applause of the audience, he shared his acceptance speech, thanking everyone who supported him.

22 反思时的动作行为

动作链:沉思过去的经历→ 分析事件的得失 → 思考改进的方法 → 做出新的决定 → 付诸实践

例子:

他坐在窗前,凝视着远方,回想着最近发生的一切→ 他细细分析了其中的得失,努力找出问题的根源 → 思考了一些改进的方法,决定改变策略 → 最终,他站起身来,准备重新开始 → 他坚定地迈出了第一步,朝着新的方向前进。

He sat by the window, gazing into the distance, reflecting on everything that had happened recently → He carefully analyzed the gains and losses, trying to identify the root cause of the problems → Thought about some ways to improve and decided to change his strategy → Finally, he stood up, ready to start again → He took the first step resolutely, moving toward a new direction.

23 野外迷路寻找回家的路

动作链:意识到迷路→ 冷静下来观察环境 → 查找地图或使用指南针 → 选择一个方向 → 途中确认路线 → 终于找到正确的路径 → 回家

例子:

他意识到自己迷路了,停下脚步→ 强迫自己冷静下来,仔细观察周围的地形 → 拿出地图和指南针,试图确定自己的位置 → 选择了一个最可能通往出口的方向 → 一边走一边确认是否在正确的路线上 → 终于在远处看到了熟悉的地标,心里一松 → 几小时后,他安全地回到了家中。

He realized he was lost and stopped in his tracks → Forced himself to calm down and carefully observe the surrounding terrain → Pulled out his map and compass, trying to pinpoint his location → Chose the most likely direction to lead him out → As he walked, he kept checking to ensure he was on the right path → Finally, he saw a familiar landmark in the distance and felt a sense of relief → A few hours later, he safely made it back home.

24 在屋子里回忆美好的过去

动作链:走进房间→ 看到熟悉的物品 → 触发记忆 → 坐下静静回忆 → 情感涌上心头 → 轻轻抚摸那些物品 → 对过去充满怀念

例子:

他走进曾经的书房,书架上还是摆满了那些熟悉的书籍→ 每一本书都承载着一段美好的回忆 → 他轻轻拿起一本书,翻开扉页,脑海中浮现出当时的画面 → 他在椅子上坐下,闭上眼睛,任由记忆涌上心头 → 眼中泛起泪光,他轻轻抚摸着书页,仿佛又回到了那个无忧无虑的时代 → 他对那些日子充满了怀念。

He walked into his old study, the shelves still lined with those familiar books → Each book carried a beautiful memory → He gently picked up a book and opened the first page, the images of those times flooding his mind → He sat down in the chair, closed his eyes, and let the memories wash over him → Tears welled up in his eyes as he gently touched the pages, as if transported back to that carefree era → He was filled with longing for those days.

25 小动物在野外探险发现人类

动作链:小动物在野外探险→ 发现陌生气味或声音 → 顺着气味/声音小心靠近 → 看到人类的身影 → 观察人类的行为 → 做出是否靠近或逃跑的决定 → 采取行动

例子:

小兔子在森林里四处探险,嗅着空气中的各种气味→ 它突然闻到了一股陌生的味道,耳朵也捕捉到了一些奇怪的声音 → 顺着气味和声音,它悄悄地靠近了一片空地 → 它拨开几根树枝,看到一个人类正坐在树下休息 → 小兔子紧张地观察着人类的动作,犹豫着要不要靠近 → 最终,它决定退回到树丛中,继续在安全的距离观察。

*The little rabbit was exploring the forest, sniffing the various scents in the air → Suddenly, it caught a strange smell and heard some unusual sounds → Following the scent and sound, it cautiously approached a clearing → Pushing aside a few branches, it saw a human sitting under a tree, resting → The rabbit nervously observed the human’s movements, unsure whether to approach → In the end, it decided to retreat back into the bushes, continuing to watch from a safe distance.*

注意

可能有的同学觉得:我学了这些动作链就可以直接套

实际上并不是,,学动作链的目的是为了了解“动作构造逻辑”

日常练习和考场上,还要把这些不同的动作链,灵活组合、扩写或者改写

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