【读后续写】高分副词的使用 1
一、高分副词积累（有些单词中文意思差不多，但在英文中还是有差异的，同学们要多查看英语解释和常用搭配。）
1.轻轻地；悄悄地(walk/close the door) quietly
2.轻轻地(sway/tremble)slightly
3.轻轻地softly/gently
4.温柔地；和蔼地mildly/gently
5.谦虚地modestly
6.沉默地speechlessly/dumbly
7.感激地gratefully
8.迅速地swiftly
9.坚定地firmly/determinedly
10.勇敢地bravely
11.热情地；热烈地warmly
12.和蔼地kindly
13.渴望地；热切地eagerly
14.害羞地；内向地shyly
15.仔细地 closely
16.专心地attentively
17.舒服地comfortably
18.考虑周到地；体谅地considerately
19.故意地deliberately
20.慷慨地generously
21.凶猛地；凶狠地；愤怒地fiercely
22.满怀希望地hopefully
23.仁慈地mercifully
24.快乐地；愉快地(smile) brightly/cheerfully
25.绝望地；拼命地desperately
26.大声地loudly
27.宜人地；和悦地；礼貌地 pleasantly
二、高分副词运用
1.She grinned at me ____________ (害羞地), her eyes sparkling.
2.The audience listened to the lecture ____________(专心地).
3.He was ____________ (故意地) trying to upset her.
4.The detective watchedhim ____________(仔细地), waiting for a reply.
5.He was treated ____________(仁慈地).
6.“Morning!” she called ____________(快乐地).
7.If you’re all sitting ____________ (舒适地), then I’ll begin.
8.Please give ____________(慷慨地) to the refugee fund.
9.“Will there be any food left over?” he asked ____________(满怀希望地).
10.He treats everyone equally and ____________(体谅他人地).
11.He looked round ____________(拼命地) for someone to help him.
12.He walked ____________ (迅速地) towards home down the dark street.
13.She smiled ____________(愉快地).
14.“I’ll do the dishes,”he said ____________(友好地；礼貌地).
15.____________(勇敢地) he went into the burning house.
16.The trees swayed ____________ (轻轻地) in the breeze.
17.For a few seconds she gazed ____________ (沉默地；一声不吭地) at him.
18.Terry greetedthe visitor ____________ (热情地).
19.“Of course I don’t mind,”she answered ____________ (和蔼地；温柔地).
20.They’re ____________ (渴望地) awaiting the big day.
21.He swayed ____________ (轻轻地), as if about to fall.
22.“I can manage,” she said ____________(坚定地).
23.“I was just lucky,” he said ____________ (谦虚地).
24.The authors ____________ (感激地) acknowledge your financial support.
25.Rosa shut the door ____________(轻轻地).
26.The dog looked at her ____________ (凶狠地).
【参考答案】
1. shyly
2. attentively
3. deliberately
4. closely
5. mercifully
6. cheerfully/brightly
7. comfortably
8. generously
9. hopefully
10. considerately
11. desperately
12. swiftly
13. brightly
14. pleasantly
15. Bravely
16. softly
17. speechlessly; dumbly
18. warmly
19. mildly; gently
20. eagerly
21. slightly
22. firmly; determinedly
23. modestly
24. gratefully
25. quietly
26. fiercely
三、实战演练（2017年6月浙江高考）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
On a bright, warm July afternoon,MacHollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with hisfriends. One of his friends had stopped to make abicyclerepair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Macpedaled(骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters athome. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him.“Man, that’s a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but awolf,quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heartjumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac’s relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac’s bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶)．
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passingcarsbut was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphillclimbbefore him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easily caught up and the wolf’s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment,Pauland Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
The car abruptly stopped in front ofhim._________________________________________
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Paragraph 2：
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived._________________________________
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【One possible version】
Paragraph 1：
The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Pauland Becky got out of thecarimmediately to give help. But with the bare hands, they didn’t dare to fight with thewolf. However, they still approached the wolfbravely. At the same time, the wolf also noticed them andfiercelyturned its head back, shoutingloudlyat Paul and Becky.Macthenjumpedoff thebicycleand was ready to fight against the wolf. That reached deadlock.
Paragraph 2：
A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived.They found the dangerous situation, where three men circled the wolf. Mac’sfriendsalso jumped off their bicycles and joined the fight with the wolf. More and more cars stopped. Some drivers took out the sticks from the cars, and some took out the knives, even the guns towards the wolf. Just at that time, the wolf might feel the threats from the people, starting to withdraw. Soon, it ran away off the road andswiftlydisappeared in the distance.
【点评】
故事情节完整紧凑合理，句式结构丰富，副词运用熟练。文中bravely的使用突出Paul and Becky尽管赤手空拳，仍然靠近那只狼的勇敢，与下文fiercely和loudly的使用形成鲜明的对比。Swiftly突出狼看到人多而感到害怕最终迅速（swiftly）逃跑。
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