A gust of cold wind blasted through the cracks in the half-open door, making me involuntarily shudder. But it bothered me none as I stormed out in a rage, slamming the door shut behind me.
My wife and I got into a bitter quarrel over an issue as small as a sesame seed.I had to leave her alone and try to find an escape in this white world of dancing snowflakes. With the heavy snow coming down, the broad street was almost empty except for a few pedestrians. I wandered aimlessly down the deserted street. My wife and I had been married for years. Though an earthquake had softened our hearts, our tempers were obviously getting worse. As the night darkened, the snow came heavier and faster, the streetlights gave a dim, helpless ray.
It was then and there that I saw a man-powered tricycle. Because the tricycle rider was a man wearing thick clothes covered in thick snow, it was hard for me to see his his face clearly, but the woman sitting behind him was very visible. Under the street lights, her red coat was a sharp contrast against the white snow. Maybe because the road was too slippery or the tricycle was too heavy, the man, bending forward, weighed his body almost entirely over the handlebar as the wheels moved slowly under his pedaling feet.
Suddenly, I saw a hand show up next to each of the man’s ears, and the hands wrapped up the ears tight. Obviously, the hands belonged to the woman. As the slope became steeper, the tricycle slowed down drastically. The man’s back bent more. The woman pressed herself forward, leaving her back to the mercy of the chilly winds, while her hands firmly wrapped up the man’s ears, making a great view in the snowscape. I felt my soul touched by something indescribable and I followed the couple subconsciously.
The man finally pulled up near a group of cabins built after the earthquake as shelters for victims.The man parked his tricycle securely and helped the woman get off.
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The next instant, I was shocked to spot the woman had just one leg. Tears welling up, I held up my head simply to let the snowflakes wet my face. |
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The next instant, I was shocked to spot the woman had just one leg. Her other leg is miss from the knee down. Maybe due to the slippery conditions of the road, the woman wobbled and was about to fall, when the man quickly extended her his right hand, which she held steadily in both hands right away. My heart literally dropped the moment I saw an empty sleeve fluttering on his left. The man had only one arm! The man held the woman by clenching one of her hands and slowly they moved towards the cabin.
Tears welling up, I held up my head simply to let the snowflakes wet my face.Up in the sky, the snow came down even heavier and faster,but I had just forgotten about the chill. After a long while, I looked homeward and quickened my pace. I felt compelled to get home as fast as I could to tell my wife what I had seen on such a snowy night. I thought, by the time I finished telling her the story, the blizzard would probably have stopped already.
本篇读后续写主要考查学生的创新思维、逻辑思维与协同思维能力。主题语境为人与社会。选材贴近生活，属于典型的故事类文章。讲述了作者在一个暴风雪的夜晚因生活琐事与妻子发生激烈争执，愤而离家，在大街上独自徘徊时见证了一对骑三轮车的夫妇，虽然生活艰辛、身体残疾却相互关心，相互支撑的感人场面。续写首句的设置既确定了故事发展的基本走向，又给学生预留了相当大的想象空间与发挥余地。
1. 依据首句，预测情节
（1） 前文作者用大量笔墨描写了妻子对丈夫的关爱，在严寒中用双手护住丈夫的耳朵为其御寒，暗示了两人感情的深厚。第一个段首句The next instant, I was shocked to spot the woman had just one leg所给信息令读者吃惊之余，也会如作者一般感动。接下去情节如何发展，不妨做以下设问：
What trouble did the woman encounter when getting off the tricycle? What did the man do to help? What would they do next? 根据逻辑推理，学生应该可以预测到妻子下车会有困难，丈夫搀扶妻子下车；前文最后一段提到了为地震受害者建筑的临时住所cabins，他们在那里停下来，所以可以预测那里应该是他们的住处。他们应该是要回家。
（2）根据第二段首句Tears welling up, I held up my head simply to let the snowflakes wet my face.可以设问如下：How did the author feel at the moment? What did he thought of/ What lesson did he get from this incident? What would he do next?由此，故事情节大致走向为：作者被这对患难夫妻的相互关爱深深触动，从而反思自己与妻子的相处从而决定回家与妻子和解。至于本段学生是着重写作者的心理活动，还是回家后和解的过程都是合乎逻辑的。本段给学生确定了一个情节发展的方向，同时又预留了足够的想象空间。只要是合乎逻辑的情节猜测均可。
2.重视情感线的发展，进行正向预测
命题除了检测学生学习成果外还有价值观引导的作用。所以续后续写的结局预测应该是积极的，正向的。这点，所给的文本及段首句也给出了充分的提示。
（三）契合原文写作风格
整篇文章情景交融，环境描写有效烘托了人物心情，并揭示出作者的情感变化，辅助推进情节发展。所以在续写过程中学生需注意这一点，尝试进行一定的环境及心理描写，使习作风格尽量与原文保持一致。
